According to my partner, Alex Ostrowski, my weaknesses were (1) being hard to follow my story, mentally, and (2) a lack of depth or background details. My strengths, according to him were (1) good grammar and punctuation throughout, and (2) there was a good order in the running of ideas and thoughts.
I plan to put more detail into my true story, so it can make more sense to my reader. I will admit, my thoughts were rushed and running rampant throughout my writing. I was thinking of so many things at the time I was writing this story. At the time the event happened, my mind was also racing with so many random thoughts along with feeling sad. I will write a bit more clearly and give more background information, so my story can make sense to my reader.
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